Still not as mindboggling as the cliche of 'it's prove of his love that he can't even control himself in bed and see to your pleasure, slowly, but must have you NOW' I've seen in tons of romance novels. So, it's a proof of love he is selfish in bed?
Bizarre, innit? Makes you suspect that the writer is trying to explain away a disastrous love-life of her own. She didn't pick bad lovers, they all just loved her too much.
This is from one of my stories: He was watching her face, enjoying the view as always, clearly delighted at the effect that he was having. He prolonged her pleasure as long as he could, then sought and found his own.
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Date: 2008-01-24 08:43 pm (UTC)Bizarre, innit? Makes you suspect that the writer is trying to explain away a disastrous love-life of her own. She didn't pick bad lovers, they all just loved her too much.
This is from one of my stories: He was watching her face, enjoying the view as always, clearly delighted at the effect that he was having. He prolonged her pleasure as long as he could, then sought and found his own.