It wouldn't have been so bad if it weren't for her speech at the very end about how it was a special bonding experience no one else could understand. That was what made it really bad. Still, even if you include where the girls were "OMG EW EW EW NO!!" about it, it isn't even 20 pages...
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Date: 2008-08-12 02:49 pm (UTC)