It's fun and I like the atmosphere/city focus, but I think it was a mistake to so clearly set up Woo Fei as a foil to D doing the same things as Lron, but...not being Leon. It makes it too hard to not compare them.
(BTW, i haven't forgotten your books, i just haven't had a chance to make it to the PO yet.)
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Date: 2008-11-19 06:42 pm (UTC)(BTW, i haven't forgotten your books, i just haven't had a chance to make it to the PO yet.)