Princess Ben by Catherine Gilbert Murdock
Sep. 5th, 2008 03:12 pmPrincess Benevolence, aka “Ben” of Montagne is the niece and sole heir of the king. She’s been sheltered from the expectations and responsibilities of a princess by her mother, Prudence, much to the consternation of her aunt, Queen Sophia, who is unable to have children herself. This changes, however when her mother and uncle are killed in an attack, and her father goes missing. With the king dead, his heir missing, and the other heir underage and completely untrained, Sophia is declared regent, and Ben is placed completely under her thumb to be trained for her duties.
In her new quarters, Ben discovers a passage a to room thatSurprise! contains spellbooks, and Ben is able to learn magic. This, however, eventually leads to her being mistaken as an attacker on herself (complicated explanation) and being forced to flee the castle, ending up in the clutches of Florian, the arrogant prince of Drachensbett, the neighboring kingdom believed to be responsible for the deaths of Ben’s uncle and mother. Drachensbett, however, blames the deaths on a dragon. And the people of Montagne don’t believe in dragons.
The problem with the book isn’t so much that there is a problem as it is that there isn’t a lot that sets Princess Ben apart from other “princess who needs to grow up (and does)” stories. It’s well written. Ben is a likable and engaging heroine, but not one who really grabs you and drags you in. The narrative structure begins showing the world through immature eyes and shows the same world through matured eyes. A narrative structure that I like, but it’s hard to not compare it to Stardust or Howl’s Moving Castle. I was initially worried it would take the “expecting her to live up to her responsibilities is unkind and expects too much, and she should get to live like she wants” stance, which is one that irritates me, as it promotes “irresponsibility is good,” but it eventually shows that Ben was wrong for ignoring her responsibilities. I wish, though, that it had acknowledged that Prudence, while a good mother, was wrong to keep Ben from learning what she needed to for her future role because of her (mutual) dislike for Sophia. Florian…well, to be honest, I thought he was an arrogant jerk, and we never saw enough of his good qualities for him to grow on me.
In the end, I like it, and will likely read any other YA fantasy novels Murdock puts out, but I don’t really feel any pull to read her earlier, modern YA books.
In her new quarters, Ben discovers a passage a to room that
The problem with the book isn’t so much that there is a problem as it is that there isn’t a lot that sets Princess Ben apart from other “princess who needs to grow up (and does)” stories. It’s well written. Ben is a likable and engaging heroine, but not one who really grabs you and drags you in. The narrative structure begins showing the world through immature eyes and shows the same world through matured eyes. A narrative structure that I like, but it’s hard to not compare it to Stardust or Howl’s Moving Castle. I was initially worried it would take the “expecting her to live up to her responsibilities is unkind and expects too much, and she should get to live like she wants” stance, which is one that irritates me, as it promotes “irresponsibility is good,” but it eventually shows that Ben was wrong for ignoring her responsibilities. I wish, though, that it had acknowledged that Prudence, while a good mother, was wrong to keep Ben from learning what she needed to for her future role because of her (mutual) dislike for Sophia. Florian…well, to be honest, I thought he was an arrogant jerk, and we never saw enough of his good qualities for him to grow on me.
In the end, I like it, and will likely read any other YA fantasy novels Murdock puts out, but I don’t really feel any pull to read her earlier, modern YA books.